I got some pretty critical feedback regarding a manuscript last week, and I won’t deny it, the comments left me feeling pretty DEVASTATED at first. What do you mean that character wasn’t developed? What do you meant there are lots of loose ends. What do you mean it’s not totally perfect!!
However, like a torrential blast of wind and rain that makes me want to curl up in my room and never come out again, I have finally gotten past my initial, emotional response and miracle of miracles: a beautiful sunny day, full of possibility now lies in front of me.
Yes, it was painful, but that dose of really thoughtful feedback has made me see my manuscript in fresh, new, and exciting ways. I can’t wait to get at it.
**it happens. Glad you are getting back on the saddle. I do want to turn you on to our editing book clubs because are a great way to get an editor’s feedback. Less than $15 per day. Just in case you’re interested…or your readers may be….here’s the link to apply for more info. http://10daybookclub.com
Thanks for the info, I will keep it in mind.
The feedback I keep getting is ”not enough emotion.” That comment drives me completely mad. Keep your head up though, I know I am.
Interesting. What genre are you writing in? What sort of narratives?
Very. I’m writing psych thrillers. Third person omniscient POV. In my opinion, the characters’ actions (punching mirrors, rolling eyes, trembling hands, etc) convey their emotions just fine. I feel like stating “Lyla was so angry she punched the mirror” sounds pretty third grade. I’m waiting to see what my editor says.
As long as it’s constructive, but I like to keep in mind it’s still your manuscript and one person’s comments don’t mean that they are correct. Keep what you wanted in mind when you are editing and don’t just go with what they told you to fix. I love that photograph–absolutely stunning!